Showing posts with label writing journey. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing journey. Show all posts

Monday, October 20, 2014

Writing For Him...or With Him?

It's been a long journey through a valley. At least, long to me. I know that we have a whole Biblical heritage of those before us who journeyed days, months, and years in deep valleys and over rocky terrain. But when one is in the thick of it, with the agony heightened and the pain overwhelming, it's hard to not beg for it to end. It is hard to not hope for a sudden stairway to appear that will take you up and out...or better yet, a giant hand to appear that you can climb up into as it lifts you away from the rocky path. Sometimes, I catch myself waiting for something better, wanting the end to come quickly, and in the mean time I make myself miserable in the here and now.

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If you are anything like me, you may have taken this perspective on your calling to write stories. You may have decided that God gave you a story and sent you out to write it down, and once you've fleshed it out, you try to hurry up and present Him with a job well done. That's when you hope for the blessing, right? To be published, to be noticed, to climb out of the valley of learning and critiques, and into the world of awards and reviews. The tricky road of story-crafting is your part in the deal, and God acts as the agent/publisher role of getting your story to where it must be read. 

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For several years I thought this way--that I was writing for God and would see His fruit at the end of it. But just like when I am going through a valley in life, the writing becomes taxing and strenuous when I try and do that part in my own effort. I can only look to the end of it and beg for God to come. Why do I forget that, actually, He is with me all along?

Does God want me to write FOR Him, or WITH Him? We are so blessed to be in this part of God's plan history-wise, where He has gifted us with the Holy Spirit and the knowledge that He is truly with us everywhere we go...even in the writing, the creating, the telling. 

I am still in a valley in life. And just now, I am finally giving myself permission to enjoy life regardless of the circumstance. I thought I would just hold my breath and survive until it was all over. But since I don't see a way up anywhere along these cliffs that surround me, I am about sick of holding all that air within me. I need to breathe in the Holy Spirit who is with me all this time, and I need to know there is everything good beside me in the valley. God's not waiting at the end of the trial. He's walking it with me.

When I sit down to write, I am not doing anything FOR God... But even better, I am privileged with the chance to write WITH God. To allow His Holy Spirit to direct my words and imagination and heart is just as rewarding as reaching the destination. I learn to abide that way, and take pleasure in the God who created me for His pleasure. I get to "do life" with the God of the Universe, instead of meeting Him down the road.
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What journey is not worth that? Even in the valleys, even in the hidden corners of your writing cave, meet God in each moment, and He will walk with you to the higher ground.

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Angie Dicken is a full-time mom and lives in the Midwest with her Texas Aggie sweetheart. An ACFW member since 2010, she has written five Historical Romance novels, has a Historical underway, and is represented by Tamela Hancock Murray of The Steve Laube Agency. Angie also spends her time designing one sheets, selling Jamberry Nail Wraps, and drinking good coffee with great friends. Check out her author page at www.facebook.com/dicken.angie and her personal blog at angiedicken.blogspot.com 

Monday, October 21, 2013

A Writer's Harvest

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The cooling weather and crisp leaves floating all around, announce that it is certainly FALL. And after a long, long summer of heat, my soul praises God for ushering in His design of the harvest season. This year, not only does my family have the pleasure of driving by combines filling grain bins full, but we also have the simple delight of an over-abundant apple tree in our yard. With our bellies happy with the produce, I can't help but think on the fruits of the Spirit...and as a writer in need of inspiration, I chose this post to elaborate on the blessing of each fruit I am given as a wordsmith!
Some of my favorite people,
cheering me on in my craziness!

Love
is the fellowship in this writing community. My friends and Alleycats always have open arms! They remind me of the JOY which writing brings to my heart, as well as give me a glimpse at the Creator's joy in bestowing such precious gifts upon me. Because of the love and joy He brings in writing and friends, I can cling to His Peace in the disappointment and doubt, knowing that I am well-loved and ordained for this journey, no matter what heartache it brings.

Often, I feel as though God's main purpose for this writing journey, is to refine a golden Patience in my naturally impatient heart. With many years of waiting, rejection, and wondering, the old is cast off, and patience has become a fragile blessing, budding ever so slow...but catching the dew of a new morning in the refining process.

As I continue on, Kindness meets me in the encouragement of a crit partner, a contest judge, and a fabulous agent. It is this fruit that gives me hope, and reminds me of the Goodness in the craft, in my purpose, in my God. Writing is only worth it if His goodness shines through on every page, at every turn.

As well as kindness, I find Gentleness in a correcting critique and a judge's suggestion. God uses each and every word to gently nudge me toward maturity in this craft. Gentleness is a comfort to my heart in the most challenging times, because it keeps my defenses low and my mind open to a more enriching journey.

It is only through God's Faithfulness in providing these abundant fruits along the way, that I am assured my path is the right one for me. His faithfulness meets me at every stumble, every victory, and every fork in the road. He never fails me. His faithfulness keeps my word count rising and my doubt falling away.

Of all these fruits, I taste the sweetness of God's journey for me, but the last fruit is one that I so often push aside in my flesh. Self-control is not as ripe as it should be when I begin to allow my thoughts to spiral downward, to take me to places of defeat, doubt, and jealousy. To take my thoughts captive is the ultimate harvest of Self-control on my journey. My basket often runs low on this fruit!

Thank goodness I have the love and joy of friends and writing! And I continue to grow the patience to wait on God to work in His kind, gentle way to show me that He will faithfully provide the promised self-control if I keep my heart open to His abundant harvest!
Had to include my daughter's journey
through the pumpkin patch!
Which fruit do you struggle with most on this journey as a writer? In life in general?

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Angie Dicken first began writing fiction as a creative outlet during the monotonous, mothering days of diapers and temper tantrums. She is passionate to impress God's love on women regardless of their background or belief. This desire serves as a catalyst for Angie's fiction, which weaves salvation and grace themes across historical cultures and social boundaries. Angie is an ACFW member and is represented by Tamela Hancock Murray of the Steve Laube Agency.




Monday, September 23, 2013

His Perfect Pace at ACFW


Wow. Has it already been eleven days? It seems like yesterday that I was turning onto the highway toward my fourth ACFW conference! And this year, it came full circle...as my first conference was in the same place...Indianapolis. It is at that first conference that I pitched the same characters (cannot call it the same book, now,after three years of rewrites), met the first of my many friends and co-Alleycats, and basically fell in love with the writing community.

The difference between the last 8 hour drive to Indy in 2010, and this one, is I drove it alone this year...didn't drag my family of five(was expecting our fourth), and pawn them off at the Indy zoo, while I ventured to the Hyatt. This year, I was alone with Jesus, listening to His music, and anxiously looking forward to wrapping my arms around my sweet sweet friends.

As I crept closer, my foot grew heavy though, and I sped along the highway, fighting off the old anxious ways of the newbie I once was, and ignoring the signs that were telling me to slow down. I noticed the $375 minimum fine in the work zone, and I saw the orange cones. I kept up with traffic though, surely I wouldn't get caught. It was just a scare tactic...that big chunk of change. I was on a mission to get to ACFW, I wanted to get there fast and feel the happiness of being among friends and writers, and the thrill of showcasing what God has done, to editors. I kept my foot on the pedal, continued at a consistent distance from the car ahead, and slammed on the brakes when the roadside digital display of my speed showed I was 9 miles over and a flash indicated a photo had been taken.
UGH!
I thought I could beat the odds, because I didn't believe they were really keeping track. My biggest excuse being that I was keeping up with traffic...were they going to ticket all of us? But in the end, the ugly truth flashed in front of me and I was not keeping up with the expectations of the law enforcement. I had raced ahead, only to feel the big fat EXPENSIVE slap of defeat.

After attending four conferences, and looking back over how far I've come (maybe not to publication, but to some sort of maturity in the process)...I realize how that traffic incident is a mirror of the writing journey as I first embarked upon it:

Beat the odds: When I wrote my first story, and began to dabble in the writing circles, I honestly thought I would not fall into the "norm" of a long journey toward publication. I poo-pooed the idea of putting my first book in a drawer never to see the light of day. And I thought, "I will show them" when it came to the extensiveness of such an endeavor as publication. Just like my zipping by the warning signs on the road, I zipped by the words of mentors and authors who said, "Writing is not for the faint at heart."

Keeping up with traffic: When I first stepped into an ACFW conference, and pitched my novel, and compared my notes with others, hearing what agents and editors had asked for, wondering why I didn't get asked for that...I began to try and keep up with the traffic so to speak. I decided to write something else, to enter contests, to put that long list of awards beneath my name, to be sure I stalked the white board at the appointments desk each year and rack up the requests. EVEN IF MY STUFF WASN'T READY...I was not going to be left behind without success.

Facing the Ugly truth:  And that truth, just like the failure of maintaining the expected speed on the highway, the ugly truth of my writing journey before this conference, was that all those attempts, all those written words, ALL those rejections, pointed to the truth that I just wasn't ready. I didn't meet the expectations of the editors, and I paid the price of a wounded ego.
This year, after much rejection under my belt, I realize that the ugly truth of trying to beat the odds and speed along in striving toward publication, the ugly truth that I tried to keep up with "traffic" or the success of others, and facing the ugly but WONDERFUL truth that I just wasn't ready before, has led me to a place where cruise control in God's plan is so much more satisfying. I continue to see the lessons he had taught me during the self-induced race before. And now, I am ready to shout out and claim this journey as uniquely my own, at my own God-induced speed!

This year, I leave behind another ACFW conference knowing the importance of abiding, giving my journey to God, and realizing that publication is not the proof of my gift, but a fruit among many on the writing branch in my heart. Yes, there is always that niggle of comparison, that shadow of regret, but if I shake it off, point my heart toward the LIGHT of God's Grace, and release the pressure on that gas pedal toward success, He'll guide me down this road of my dream at His Most Perfect Pace.
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Angie Dicken first began writing fiction as a creative outlet during the monotonous, mothering days of diapers and temper tantrums. She is passionate to impress God's love on women regardless of their background or belief. This desire serves as a catalyst for Angie's fiction, which weaves salvation and grace themes across historical cultures and social boundaries. Angie is an ACFW member and is represented by Tamela Hancock Murray of the Steve Laube Agency.


Friday, October 19, 2012

Writing Road Trip - Destination Publication

All of us are on a journey of some sort. To glorify God, to have children, to get a job. For most here, it's a writing journey and our destination is publication. Whether we're looking to publish our first or fifteenth book, making our way there is like a road trip, with twists and turns and roadblocks and sights to see the whole way there.

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My message today is that the journey is just as important as the destination. Want to see how? Sit back and enjoy the ride.

Ready, Set, Drive!

You're packed up and excited to get behind the wheel. This is when you tell yourself you have a story to write and you're going to write it!

Why is this important?
This is the foundation of your trip. The excitement to go. The passion for your journey. And even God's whisper to you that you have a mission.

First stop, Grand Canyon!

This is the first planned stop of your trip, after following the directions and exiting in the right spot. You've made it, and it's beautiful. This is where you've finished your first draft, and it's beautiful! Kind of a momentous occasion.

Why is this important?
Well, you HAVE to finish a novel as a writer, of course. But this is still huge. You've committed to something and you did it!

Bathroom Break!

Okay, maybe you didn't plan this stop. But you had too much bottled iced tea and you have to stop. No big deal, you're still on track to the next location. This is where you have to edit your first draft, or get feedback from someone who's read it. It's okay, you knew you were going to have to revise a little! No big deal, even if you had to take out a part that was kind of awesome.

Why is this important?
Because you're not going to know every moment of your journey and it's smart to know ahead of time that sometimes you're just going to have to go with the flow.

Next Stop, Las Vegas!

Look at all the lights! It's kind of exciting, and you made it here just in time to find a Starbucks and giant club sandwich (or whatever you like to eat). This is where you are ready to break into the publishing world. You've entered a contest, you're querying agents, hey--you're even going to conference. You're the king of the world!

Why is this important?
Because putting yourself out there is the first "real" step of the publishing journey. No matter what the result, this is a step you have to take.

Oh no! Flat tire!

No, you weren't planning on stopping here. You weren't planning on standing out in the rain. You weren't planning on having to spend a couple hundred dollars to get towed and buy a new tire. Ugh. Yeah, this is where your contest entry was met with less than stellar feedback. Or maybe you got your first - or 10th - rejection.

Why is this important?
You can learn from it. Learn how to become a better writer. Learn how to have a thick skin in this industry. Learn or remember that God is still on your side, and He wants the best for you - aka, no flat tires! (Or at least, as smooth a resolution to those flat tires as possible.)

You're in California!

Yippee! There's an ocean on the other side of this state - your GPS is sure of it! This is where you see your destination in sight. You got encouraging feedback from an editor or you won an important contest. You got an agent! You actually might. get. published.

Why is this important?
Because there are always encouraging moments in your journey. You have to go through the downs to get to the ups. Speaking of downs...

Detour!

Oh yeah, you thought you were almost there! Sorry, road's closed. Take another route. This is where an editor says your book isn't the right fit for us. But, but, but!

Why is this important?
Because it's going to happen. More than once. There are going to be detours in your writing journey. And you know what? God knows about them. Even better, He's on this journey with you. Taking a detour might seem off the path to you, but it's directly on His path. Let HIM be your GPS.   

Hey, I like that. Let God Be Your GPS! 

You've arrived at your destination! The ocean? Publication?

Whatever it is, you've made it. It might have taken longer than you thought, but the whole trip was important. Those fun things you saw along the way, the encouragements, the disappointments. Every moment of the journey is important because every moment and how you deal with it, the way it affects you and other people, the way you push forward - all of that makes you who you are as a writer.

Writing is a journey, not a destination. You're always going to be working for something and there are always going to be good times and bad times. So if you can, enjoy each moment and learn something from it. Appreciate where it takes you and who you become because of it. It will show in your writing, and that's a great thing!

Have any of you ever wanted to skip the journey and head straight to publishing? Even if it's been hard, what has helped you grow the most s a writer?

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Cindy is a Colorado native, living near the mountains with her husband and three beautiful daughters. She writes contemporary Christian romance, seeking to enrich lives with her stories of faith, love, and a touch of humor.

To learn more about Cindy, visit her at her personal blog, www.cindyrwilson.com

Thursday, August 30, 2012

Perspective

My book officially "releases" in two days.

I won't lie. I'm completely, totally, on-top-of-the-world excited!

But....

It isn't the coolest thing ever. There are MUCH cooler things in this world.

Like seeing a newborn baby born into this world.

Or witnessing a person come to know Jesus for the first time, especially your own child.

Or getting a phone call letting you know that your dying child is going to have a second chance at life.

Yup. There are a lot more amazing things in this world than being published.

A few years ago, I might have argued that being published was one of the biggest things that could happen to me. Now I'll be happy to argue the opposite to anyone who cares to listen.

It all has to do with perspective.

God taught me perspective through my publishing journey.

In 2010, the day I found out that my manuscript did NOT final in a contest, I also found out that my unborn daughter had a malformed heart and only had a 70% chance to live past the age of 5... and only an 80% chance to live past the first week of life.

Perspective: Bad contest news... who really cares?

In January 2011, I spoke with my now editor on the phone when she requested me to send her a proposal for a book. My FIRST editor request! An hour later, doctors told me my 6-month-old daughter was dying and would only have a chance to live if we put her on the heart transplant list.

Perspective: Sending the proposal was now just busy work to get my mind off the scary stuff. Nothing more.

In April 2011, I found out my manuscript semi-finaled in that same contest it hadn't the year before. The next day, I got a phone call from my daughter's cardiologist. There was a life-saving heart available. About 15 hours later, my daughter's heart was being cut out of her chest and a heart from a deceased 2 year old was being put in it's place.

Perspective: Semi-final? What Semi-final? My baby is going to LIVE!!!

In June 2011, just days after going home for the first time, my daughter was admitted back into the hospital with a failing heart. She failed fast, and emergency, exploratory surgery was performed to try and fix it. It worked, and she came home! The next week, my editor called, offering me a book contract. Two days later, I signed with amazing agent, Rachelle Gardner.

Perspective Contract was AMAZING. An Agent was AMAZING. I won't lie. Both dreams come true. But it was just the final, decorative touches on the beautiful present God had given me, my daughter home, and well.

In July 2011, we finalized the contract and I officially signed it on Annabelle's birthday, 7/20/11. Two days later, she almost died at home. Unresponsive, barely breathing, she was given CPR, intubated in the ambulance and life-lighted to the hospital.

Perspective: What contract? I just want my baby better.

September 2012. Annabelle is doing great at 2 years of age. She's newly walking, trying to start to talk, still working on learning to eat. We are so very thankful for all God has brought us through and for EVERY SINGLE DAY we have with our sweet baby girl.

And my book releases.

Perspective:  Both are very, very, very cool.

But I think you can guess which one is the coolest.

Discussion: What is cooler than YOUR writing journey?

Monday, August 20, 2012

Welcome Author Jocelyn Green

I had the pleasure of meeting Jocelyn Green at a writer's workshop in Cedar Falls, Iowa. She is definitely a writer I look up to, as she has already successfully written non-fiction amidst the duties of motherhood, and now has released her debut fiction novel, Wedded To War. I just received my copy of it a few weeks ago, and just the first few pages will keep you wanting more!

Welcome to the Writer's Alley, Jocelyn! Tell us a little about yourself and your writing journey.

My husband Rob and I have two active kiddos- Elsa is 6, and just started first grade, and Ethan is 3, and going to preschool. We live in Cedar Falls, Iowa. People sometimes ask me what I do in my free time, and I usually give them a blank stare. I don’t really have free time, between my family, basic homemaking, and writing. But if I did, I would like to scrapbook again and play the piano again and cook more.

I always knew I wanted to be a writer, even as a child, so I majored in English at Taylor University, and minored in mass communications and public relations. My first job out of college was writing public relations materials for my alma mater, then I moved to Washington, D.C., to be the editor and writer for the Council for Christian Colleges & Universities. After serving in that role for two and a half years, I married my husband, who was a Coast Guard officer at the time, which meant quitting my job and moving six thousand miles to a small town called Homer, Alaska.

This seemed like a good time to give freelance magazine article writing a try. So I pursued that, and was able to freelance full-time for a few years. It was also during this time I was inspired to write my first book: Faith Deployed: Daily Encouragement for Military Wives. But it took my agent three years to find a contract, and by that time I had a one-year-old (Elsa) and had assumed my writing days were over. Then I got that first golden book contract, thankfully, and Faith Deployed was published by Moody in 2008. Since then I’ve written/co-authored three more nonfiction books, and written a novel. So if any of you mommies think being published must wait until your kids are grown, think again!

How did you decide to switch from writing non-fiction to writing fiction?

I never thought I would write fiction because I think the competition is so fierce. I wasn’t convinced I had the slightest chance of making it beyond the slush pile. But I think the real hesitation was that I hadn’t yet come up with (or discovered) a fictional story that really cried out to be written.

And then I did. I visited the Adams County Historical Society in Gettysburg, PA, in the fall of 2010 to do some research for a nonfiction book that also just released this summer: Stories of Faith and Courage from the Home Front. My research there led me to read diaries, letters, and newspaper articles written by women civilians who were thrust into the drama of war, rose to the occasion beyond anyone expectations, and affected the course of history. Reading their words on a rainy day in Gettysburg, the stories really came to life for me. I kept thinking, “This would make a great novel! Somebody really ought to write this story!”

Then, a week later, my editor from Moody called me and said they were looking for more fiction to publish. So I put my doubts aside and worked feverishly on a book proposal for a four-book series on unsung heroines of the Civil War. They liked it, and now we have the Heroines Behind the Lines series! Wedded to War is Book One.

What are the differences in the writing process for each?
They are very different. Before I wrote fiction, I mostly wrote magazine articles and devotions. Those were all short, between 400 words and 2500 words. And usually, I didn’t create the story, I just followed it, and then told it. Now with a novel, I’m writing 100,000 words, and creating not just the story, but the characters too, plus weaving different subplots together.

Setting up the story world was also a new experience for me. For instance, I wrote almost 200 short stories of women and their contributions to various American wars, but they were very focused just on what the women did and said. When I began writing Wedded to War, I couldn’t’ stop there. I had to find out what the women wore, ate, did for fun, what kind of plumbing they had, etc. I had to know how they would have gotten from one part of town to another, and how long a train ride from New York to Washington would have taken (including the stops in Baltimore and Philadelphia). What newspaper did they read? How much did it cost? What colors were most popular for formal ball gowns, and how on earth did they get dressed with all those layers? The story world has to be accurate and vivid if the reader is going to be immersed in the novel, so it’s not something we can skimp on.

What I did find useful from my journalism background, though, was that I knew how to research, and I knew how to interview people. So before I write my novels, I interview the characters pretty thoroughly. And I will admit it’s nice to be able to put words in their mouths. Sometimes I wished I could do that for my magazine articles!
Just from your descriptive detail in the first chapter, I can tell you put in a lot of research hours. How long did you research before you started the first draft?

I spent nine months researching before I started writing (not including the first 50 pages of the book proposal). That left me with about two months to write the book, which was really hard. I told myself I wouldn’t do that ever again, but here I am on the second novel, and it’s dĂ©jĂ  vu!

Do you have any advice for writers who have a passion for both non-fiction and fiction writing?

Study the conventions and rules for both genres, because they are quite different, but also look for ways they can complement each other. For instance, there are some fiction techniques that can make nonfiction more gripping emotionally, and there are nonfiction techniques that can strengthen fiction, too.

If you could give one piece of advice to someone starting out on this journey, what would it be?

Just one piece? Learn the craft. Now to expand on that: There are no shortcuts in becoming a good writer. Read books on how to do it. Subscribe to Writer’s Digest magazine, or something similar. Go to as many writers conferences as you can afford to go to. Join associations like American Christian Fiction Writers to get some great networking and professional development. Also, the most fun piece of advice: read! Read what you want to write. If you want to write inspirational romance, read really good inspirational romance. If you like mystery, read really good mystery. Some things about writing are taught, and some are caught. (For more specific advice, see http://www.jocelyngreen.com/on-writing/)

Great tips, Jocelyn! Thank you so much for visiting today. I can't wait to read the rest of Wedded to War. We hope you will come visit the Alley again soon!

Thank you! I’d love to come back!
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Angie Dicken first began writing fiction as a creative outlet during the monotonous days of diapers and temper tantrums. She is passionate to impress God's love on women regardless of their background or belief. This desire serves as a catalyst for Angie's fiction, which weaves salvation and grace themes across cultures. She is an ACFW member and CEO of a family of six.
 

Monday, March 12, 2012

How Do you Like Your Stakes?

From The Writers Alley Archives:

So how do you? If we’re talking steaks, I’m a medium well kind-of-gal, but when we’re talking about ‘writing’ stakes. The best way to serve those up is well-done.


What is a stake, you ask?

Well, besides the wooden piece that holds down your tent, or heretics are strapped to, or slays certain toothy-undead, it’s also one of the key elements to create a page-turner novel. It’s the reason readers care.

Stakes increase our empathy, draw us in, capture our hearts, and lead us to the last page. It’s like climbing a hill that keeps getting steeper and steeper until the hiker is clinging to the side of a cliff, barely able to keep from falling down against the jagged rocks below.

You can pick up any great book and see how the stakes for the main character keep increasing until the reader is unsure whether the character will achieve his/her goal at all.

Donald Maas says “high stakes yield high success”

What’s the essence of increasing the stakes? Guiding the readers into as deep a relationship with your characters as you have. Close first person. But that means we have to know our characters intimately – otherwise we cannot describe what we do not know.

So once you know your character what questions should you ask to increase your stakes?

1. What does your character NEED? WANT? Whether it’s to destroy the ring of power, find a husband, an anectdote, or solve a crime – you must know what your character needs most – or wants most.

2. What makes my character freeze with fear? Obviously in the Twilight saga, vampires do not cause Bella to ‘freeze with fear’, but Edward leaving does. So, of course, it has to happen.

3. How can I make my characters needs or wants matter even more to him? (this automatically increases the stakes) For example, in Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade – it is one thing for Indiana to want the Cup of Christ. He’s in the secret cave ready to go and get it. The tension is automatically ramped up when the bad guy shoots Indy’s father and then he HAS to go get the Cup of Christ. First he wants the cup, but the stakes are raised because he needs the cup. Changing the want into a need automatically increases the tension.

4. How can you make your characters suffer? Or place them in danger? (I’m not talking just making them uncomfortable, I mean twist the knife. As sad as it sounds, readers enjoy reading about people suffering to the max…and then overcoming the impossible.)

5. Are there external and internal threats? Your characters have both external and internal goals, therefore they must have conflict in both of those areas too. In Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice, the external threats to Darcy and Elizabeth are Lady Catherine de Burgh, Lizzie’s mother (and sisters’) behavior. Internal threats are Lizzie’s and Darcy’s own personal pride and/or insecurities. Their own assumptions about the other person.

6. Can you write down the stakes in your wip? Do you know what they are?

7. How can you make those stakes higher? How can you make the trouble worse?

8. And even higher? Write it down.

Remember – you must be MEAN to your hero or heroine. Being nice does NOT increase tension. You want to try and push them to the breaking point.

In my wip, my heroine never wants to work in the rural Blue Ridge Mountains again, but as her first job, she’s sent to start a new speech-pathology program at UVA’s satellite campus in the teeny (very rural) town of Wise, VA.

She WANTS to work at UVA, Charlottesville like her dad. (external)

She WANTS to prove to herself she is not like her alcoholic mother, and certainly not dependent on anyone else for her well-being. (internal)

1. She’s in rural Blue Ridge Mountains

2. She makes a wager with her supervisor to turn cattle farmer Reece Mitchell into a high-class, smooth talking gentleman in 6 weeks or her supervisor will present her research at the national convention (which gives her a good boost toward a job in a much better place than Wise, VA) - He's not an easy fixer-upper either. Cute, but far from high-class.

3. She feels an immediate attraction for the cattle farmer – who has no intention of leaving his farm and family to move anywhere else.

4. She has a condescending college Dean who wants to get rid of the satellite program, but the program is the way the heroine (Adelina) will prove herself.

5. By the end, she is almost loses her life because she gets drunk (something her mom would do) and crashed her car into a dam waterway which is filling with water.

6. The final stake is her choice: to stay in Wise with the guys she loves and forego her dream, or give up on this amazing man and go to Charlottesville.

I’m bound to think of more ways to make things worse as I go along, but you get the basic idea.

So what about you? Can you list some of the stakes in your wip? How can you make them worse? And even more worse?

Share – and let us brainstorm a bit with you.

Friday, March 2, 2012

What to do when you find your book on Amazon... (a 12-step program)


I was perusing my e-mails one day a few weeks ago, when a new message came into my inbox.

"Krista... Have you seen this?"

Then a link.

To Amazon.

TO MY BOOK!!!!!!!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

That was my response after I clicked on said link and it went to amazon.com to the page that had my debut novel listed with price and everything! HOLY CANOLY!

So... for all you aspiring writers out there... WHEN you get your contract... and WHEN you find your book on Amazon... this is what you do!

  1. Scream.
  2. Pinch Yourself.
  3. Scream Again.
  4. Call everyone on your speed dial of your phone and tell them to go to amazon and enter your name and a keyword for your book so they can see something super cool.
  5. Scream again.
  6. Go look at all the other "sites" and find your book there too! If you are CBA... Christianbook.com. For everyone, BN.com... booksamillion.com... You can also check to see if your publisher has updated their website to include your book info as well! 
  7. Scream, yet again. (might want to buy your family ear plugs while you are on amazon... overnight shipping... better yet run to Target before #8...)
  8. E-mail every e-mail loop you have announcing this fun news. In all caps. Bold. Italics. Size 50 font. Color Red.
  9. Blog about it and beg everyone you know to pre-order your book so you can get an amazon ranking (FYI: I did not know this, but once you have pre-orders... you'll get a "ranking" in Amazon on your books page! Currently as I type, mine is around 30k. However... I'm typing this a week early, so it's probably currently like 2,438,234 or something to that affect. I realize the initial hype that I created by my #6 will wear off pretty quickly....)
  10. Scream again.
  11. Go to www.authorcentral.com and set up your author page. You will be able to link your author page to your book, enter your bio, add your profile picture (you do have a profile picture at this point, right?!?), and even link your twitter feed and potentially your blog feed as well. Later, this will be a great holding place that people can go to and view ALL your millions of books you have in print... in one place! Once your book is released, you'll be able to view (limited) sales numbers here as well!
  12. Check your Amazon ranking every 5 minutes for the first 48 hours. Then give yourself a once a week limit otherwise you MIGHT go completely insane. Plus, you need to get writing that next book!!!!
And of course, this post wouldn't be complete without including...

A link to my book on Amazon.... CLICK HERE
A link to my book on Christianbooks.... CLICK HERE
A link to my book on Booksamillion.... CLICK HERE




Link to my blog where I announced my book cover/back cover copy...

What? You think I'm excited??? Really???? You could TELL THAT BY THIS POST????????


Discussion: What was your first reaction or what do you think your first reaction will be when on that glorious day you see your name and book title on Amazon??

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Krista is a follower of Jesus, a wife, a mother, and a contemporary romance author. She recognizes that life can be frustrating and just plain not fun sometimes, but believes that laughter and smiles can make the not-so-fun a little better! She blogs about the amazing things God has been doing and her journey as a busy momma of 4 and caregiver to a daughter with a rare congenital heart defect at http://reflectionsbykrista.blogspot.com. She is represented by the fab agent, Rachelle Gardner, and her debut novel, Sandwich, With a Side of Romance, releases in September 2012.

Wednesday, February 8, 2012

Give Yourself a Break!

I don't know about you, but I jumped headfirst into the waters of my first manuscript and didn't come to the surface for, oh, like six months.

Then I realized I had a family who wanted me to feed them and talk to them.

But then the pressures of succeeding pressed in again, and I had to keep writing, keep editing, to prove to myself that I could do it. I could get an agent. I could get a contract.

I pushed through the exhaustion, the doubts, and the prose I'd drafted with one goal in mind. Get published.

Last summer I came one step closer to that goal when I landed an agent. And praise the Lord, my agent understands how difficult my current phase of life is...living as a stay-at-home mom with two young children. But not all writers find themselves in such a flexible situation.

I've recently talked to friends who are unagented who are facing the doubts and the pressures. They keep hearing that they should meet a certain word-count quota or they're placing self-imposed pressure to get to the next step. In all these interactions, one thing keeps coming to mind.

SLOW. DOWN.

Yes, I'm shouting those words. You see, in this pre-agented/pre-published stage of your writing career, this is one time when YOU get to choose your deadlines. You get to soak in all you can, to write for the pure joy of it, without time pressure or content expectations.

Obviously if your ultimate goal is to get published, you want to craft a story that will be publishable. And sure, plenty of people recommend sticking to a regular writing schedule.

But I'm here today to take the pressure off of you. If you have a family who needs you, throw the writing schedule to the wind for a while. If you're facing a tough emotional struggle, write something to soothe your hurts rather than pumping out drivel that you don't feel.

This is one time you are free to write whatever you want, whenever you want. So embrace it! And enjoy the moment. Because once you're published, you can never go back.

What sort of pressures do you place on yourself or your writing journey? Do you find yourself anxious to make it to the next step of your career? How often do you slow down and just enjoy where you're at?

*Water photo by Koratmember / FreeDigitalPhotos.net
**Odometer photo by Arvind Balaraman / FreeDigitalPhotos.net

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Sarah Forgrave is a stay-at-home writer-mom who feels blessed to pursue her calling and passion. She writes contemporary romance for the inspirational market and is a regular contributor to the webzine Ungrind.

To learn more about Sarah, visit her personal blog at:
http://www.sarahforgrave.com/blog

Tuesday, November 22, 2011

The Bus Route of a Writer

Transportation is a funny thing. Some of us like to drive a car and be in control. Some prefer to fly, reaching their destination at record speed. Some might prefer a train or maybe a bike to get us where we are going. What mode of transportation do you think we writers tend to take on the journey to publication? The bus. For those of you who have never ridden a bus, there is much to be learned in the busing experience.

You must have endurance to ride the Writer's Bus. You see, certain aspects of a bus ride are not pleasant. On a longer journey, a bus will have a toilet, and sometimes that toilet just plain stinks. Sometimes your seat neighbors are noisy, preventing you from sleeping. Sometimes they want to talk to you, keeping you from that book you have been dying to finish. For the writer, you have to endure the hard things on the journey to publication. There's rejection, poor contest results, a harsh critique, and the ever present fear that you aren't good enough. You have to learn to tune out the bad and keep your eyes on the road. The goal is straight ahead.

You must have humility to ride the Writer's Bus. We've all been there. You are riding along and the bus stops, letting people off and picking up others. Your ride seems to be taking forever as you keep stopping, letting off more and more people. On the Writer's Bus, you may have a long journey ahead of you. You will have to learn to have patience and a big dose of humility to watch those on the same journey get off earlier than you. You will be tempted to compare and get depressed that you haven't received "the call" to get off, but you need to know that everyone's journey is different. Some might be going across town, and then some might be crossing state lines, taking alot longer than expected. Keep your chin up. Your stop is coming!

You will experience joy on the Writer's Bus. There is such a variety of people who ride the bus, with a variety of experiences. You will meet people who will become life-long friends. You will meet those who will encourage you, critique you, and motivate you to keep spinning tales, even through the difficult times. This will be one of the greatest blessings on the ride...friendships that will help you along the way.

While there are certain aspects of the Writer's Bus that are difficult, the journey to publication is an exciting one. New people to meet, new stories to write, and new obstacles to overcome. It's a difficult trek, but one that will build character, discipline, and grit. It will be a journey that will bring you closer to the One who called you to board the bus. You will learn without a shadow of a doubt that He is the Bus Driver, opening the door for you to get on and opening the door to let you off at your destination.

Trust the Driver. The length of your journey rests in His hands.

What has been your experience on the Writer's Bus? Can you think of any other way the writing journey is like a bus ride? 



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This post is brought to you by
 Sherrinda Ketchersid

Sherrinda is wife to "Pastor John" and mother to three giant sons and one gorgeous daughter. A born and bred Texan, she writes historical romance filled with fun, faith, and forever love.

Friday, June 4, 2010

A Writer's Balance: How to help your family not hate your writing

Frozen Pizza for the 15th time in a month.
Chinese takeout for the 14th time in a month.
Kids/Spouse/Self wearing dirty clothes for the 4th week in a row.Moldy bread that could cure the world's deceases.A kitchen floor that looks chocolate-brown even though it's supposed to be white.

What do all these things have in common?

They are all symptoms of a writer's life out of balance. Although, for you male writers, the list might look more like: Trash overflowing, sleeping on the couch, being able to make a maze out of the front lawn, and children looking at you and asking, "Mom, what's that guys name again?"

Please don't get me wrong. I'm a big believer that writing, for most of us, is more than a hobby. It's a future second job. (I think of this pre-published time like college and then when we are agented, looking for an editor... like interviewing for jobs!)

Whereas our families are super important, we do have to make sacrifices in order to pursue our writing if we are serious. In my own family, my husband and kids understand that Mommy needs writing time. They ask me about my writing, they smile when I get off on some tangent about how my character is acting. They may not understand it, but they love and support me.

But there is a point where we go too far. Where our family turns from supporting us (or for some with less than supportive families... tolerating us) on this journey to despising the journey because of what it's doing to them.

I have to be honest. I teeter on this balance point waaayyyyyyy too often. I work full-time, have 3 kiddos and baby Annabelle on the way, and have a husband who works most every evening and Saturday. I struggle daily to know where the balance is.

But, I have found a few tips that are helpful, and thought I'd share them with you.
  • Know the signs. They say the first thing to getting better is knowing there is a problem. The signs above are a little silly, but in moderation, they are good indicators. A sulking, irritable spouse, kids who are fighting too much or back talking, or taking a good look at the ol' budget and seeing how much you've spent on "out to eat" activities are good things to keep an eye on. Not to mention the size of the to-be-cleaned laundry pile.
  • Scheduling. This one is hard for me because I don't have much time to schedule, but plot out time that is for "writing" only and let your family know it. Ask them to respect your time, but then make sure you return the favor and put writing aside when it is family time.
  • Advance Warning. If you are coming up against a deadline or even a weekend you want to "marathon" to get a chunk done, let your family know ahead of time. I'm a firm believer that people can handle things better if they know about it ahead of time.
  • Date Night. Not only with your spouse, but with your kids as well. Scott and I schedule "dates" with each of the kids. It's time alone with each kid separately to focus just on them. We might go see a movie, go to the mall, or go play putt-putt. Sometimes it's just going to get ice-cream and walking around Target and letting them show me the things they want for an upcoming birthday. But regardless of the activity, it's time for them to feel special, and to know that they are so much more important than work, writing, or social networking.
  • Enlist Help. SHhhhhhh... don't tell anyone this, but I've come to the realization that I can't do everything. I know, earth-shattering huh! I'm NOT Super Wonder Woman, even though I like to pretend or try to be sometimes! So, delegate. It is good for kids to have a few chores. It's good for hubby to be responsible for dinner a few times a week. It won't kill them, I PROMISE!
  • Be choosy. There are a ton of things we could get busy and involved in. Church ministries, children's school activities, as well as writing groups and social networking areas. Be picky about what you join or participate in. As I said above, you aren't super wonder woman. You can't do everything, even though you may want to. Prayerfully ask God what activities He wants you to be a part of, and don't let anyone guilt you into doing something that God hasn't led you to do. I'm a firm believer that writing IS a ministry ... even though some may not see it as that until we have the big "P" in front of our title. Remember, we live to please God, not man.
My most important tip is this:

Prioritize
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1.) God
2.) Family
3.) Writing

Although, I say God is #1, but really, He is 1, 2, 3, to infinity. I firmly believe He doesn't just hold one place in a priority list, but should be an integral factor in each and every priority, as I seek God to be Lord over my family, my writing, my relationships, my church, my hobbys, my day job, the list goes on and on.

So what about you? How is your writing/life balance lately? Any tips that have worked for you?

Wednesday, May 5, 2010

Come Write With Us

By Mary Vee


Two years ago God moved my family to Montana. Mountains, deserts, Yellowstone River…. Frazzle day at work? Need dazzle? No problem, I stand up, and look out my cubicle window at the Beartooth Mountains.



In need of lunchtime escape? No problem, I trek to the Yellowstone River. Inspiration needed? A ten minute drive up to the where one can literally see over a hundred miles past my oasis city surrounded by desert, ranches, and Crow Indian reservation. God gave my family a great place to live.



This is my favorite room in our house. A lifetime of bad reception, no reception, and broken TVs have fueled the literary takeover of our family room. To this day, my kids would rather go to a bookstore, the library, or delve into one of their own books for free time.

God has blessed my husband and I with three children: two in college, one in high school.

I like to travel, Facebook, tell stories, sit in front of a fireplace with a good book, watch my children, sip tea at a coffee shop with my husband, listen to music, stand in a wood or by a bubbling brook and listen, and sometimes—eat broccoli.

My favorite section of any library or bookstore is the children’s corner. Although, of late I think I’ve grown up a little, I’ve wandered into the teen area.

My first novel trampled through a publisher’s slush pile and landed on an editor’s desk for several months before flying back to my mailbox. The rejection note broke my heart, but strengthen my resolve to learn how to write. Currently I’m working on a picture book and a young adult fiction novel.

I’m a member of ACFW and hang out with families and kids at my blog, God Loves Kids where I tell Bible stories in family friendly language. Each story includes questions to promote family discussion.

At a time when I didn’t know where to go, God took my hand and led me to Bible College. He continued leading me to short-term missions working with kids, children's church ministries, teaching elementary students at Christian Schools, and in many other wonderful ways. From struggles with cancer to joys of hearing my children laugh, God has faithfully walked with me.

May your writing journey cause you to walk close to Christ and share His love to those your words touch.

Speaking of the which, take a moment to share in the comment section how your writing journey has brought you close to Christ. We all here at Writer's Alley would love to hear about you :)

Stop by on Wednesdays and share more with me. I’d love to hear about your writing.

Tuesday, May 4, 2010

A Middle Aged Newbie

I'm a middle aged Texan who is just two years into her writing journey. Oh, I've dreamed of being a writer since my teens. Like others before me, I started a novel, scribbling in my big, fat, girly handwriting, but I never finished it and it was stuffed in the bottom of my dresser. I suppose it is now in some dump somewhere, composting and enriching the earth.

I got married to the love of my life at the young age of 19, had four children by the time I was 30, all the while supporting my husband in ministry at various churches. Yep. I'm a pastor's wife. I usually don't like people to know that, because once they do, walls seem to go up. But it is such a huge part of who I am. I'm in ministry and proud of it. Oh wait, can I be proud? Is that allowed? Sigh...I never said I was a "good" pastor's wife!

I also have a full time job as an attendance clerk/registrar/receptionist at an elementary school nearby. It's a busy and sometimes stressful job, but I love the people I work with and I love having summers off! (Time to write, write, write, you know!)

So when did I start my real writing journey? It was the summer of 2008. I was 42 years old and figured out I would never realize my dream of writing a novel if I never even tried. So on my summer break I wrote 3/4 of my first novel. Since then I've been getting feedback and some critiques on it, but haven't really edited it like I should. It's my first baby and I'm too nervous about "raising it".

I need a few more books under my belt to "learn" how to write and maybe I can go back to my firstborn and revise it like it needs to be. So I am ruminating on a new idea, percolating scenes and characters, hoping to find a great story in the process.

While my first story was a medieval, my next will either be a contemporary or a Regency. I can't decide. I love Regency, but the research required scares me. Contemporary may be easier. Maybe not. But be sure, I will share stories of exploration in the different genres.

Yes, I'm the newbie in the Writer's Alley, so you will get my bumbling first attempts at....well, everything. I'll share my successes, my joys, my struggles, and my rejections. Oh yes...rejections are a part of the journey. At least that's what I'm told! It's all good, really! You gotta find the fun in all aspects of the journey, because life's too short to be wearing your Cranky Pants all the time! (I try to keep those cranky pants tucked away in the closet, but they tend to make an appearance every now and then!)

I've got a question for you:  How new to the journey are you? Are you at the starting line? Have you stopped along the way? Or are you at the finish line and received the prize of publication? How long has your journey taken?

Sherrinda