Monday, January 21, 2013

Clean up, Clean up...Edits, Edits EVERYWHERE!

My son just a couple years younger...but still a pouter!
“I can't clean up all of this by myself!”

Pout.

“It's too hard.”

STOMP!

And my six year old throws himself to the ground. I pick him up gently, with a smile on my face, and calmly say (through gritted teeth), “just one piece at a time.” And I sing the clean up song while he rolls his eyes and attempts to pick up a lego like it matches his body weight.

Although I am talking about a kindergartner (yes, he STILL hasn't grown out of this!) unfortunately, I can relate—as a writer (and a mom with mounds of laundry, piles of dishes, and legos in every nook and cranny).

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I am in the middle of rewrites and came up with a fabulous twist that will give my characters motivation, my scenes raison d'etre, and my overall plot, cohesiveness. But when I think about actually putting my fingers to the keyboard and opening up the manuscript file to begin my reconstruction, I clam up!

Ugh! How can I even manage to do this with two hundred plus pages already filled with words, and colored with characters already active in my story? It's daunting to say the least.

But...just like I told my son, “one piece at a time”...if I focus on one scene at a time--how I am going to redefine the motivation, reconstruct the scene so it pushes the story toward the new twist, and focus on maintaining and deepening the characters WITHIN that scene--it becomes less overwhelming.

It is less of scooping up several bricks at once and losing some in the process,
but more of placing the tiny pieces in the bin one at a time while anticipating the potential of a whole new creation later on.

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The great thing about legos, is you can construct and reconstruct. You can set aside old creations for later use, or recreate to build something completely new.

My son is mighty proud when his mess is finally clean. And the next day, when he pulls out the lego bin and builds something from the pieces of an old aircraft or township, he holds his perfected creation up with pride and says, “Look what I made!”

One at a time. Clean up those manuscripts one edit at a time. Don't look at the giant mess on the floor, but look at the building blocks you have created and continue to edit with patience and focus.

Soon...you might just have a tidy draft of great potential!
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Angie Dicken first began writing fiction as a creative outlet during the monotonous days of diapers and temper tantrums. She is passionate to impress God's love on women regardless of their background or belief. This desire serves as a catalyst for Angie's fiction, which weaves salvation and grace themes across historical cultures and social boundaries. Angie is an ACFW member and is represented by Tamela Hancock Murray of the Steve Laube Agency.

Saturday, January 19, 2013

What's Up the Street for Next Week?

What good book did you read this week? As writers, we should always be doing plenty of reading. Share your recommendations in the comment section and be sure and check out all the great news that the Alley has to share this weekend!!

Angie  is all about editing your book...one. scene. at. a. time. So take it in slices on Monday.

What are you doing to make your antagonist believable? By Julia on Tuesday.

What is your personality type and how does it affect your writing? Take the journey with Karen on Wednesday.

Take the role of community to the next level in your writing and embrace it!! With Ashley on Thursday.

It's Amy's FIRST post, so be sure and give her a great welcome on Friday, okay? She's got it coming in slices...you'll have to come back on Friday to find out what I mean. ;-)



Word on the street...

The Writer's Alley now has a Facebook FAN page! Check it out and be sure and "like" us. :-))

Friend of the Alley MINDY OBENHAUS has SOLD  to Love Inspired and is now agented by Tamela Hancock Murray! All in the same day! Tell her congrats on Facebook!

The winner of Ethel Herr's is Nancy Kimball! Nancy, be sure and check your inbox, there is an email waiting there for you from me. ;-)

Have a great weekend everyone and we'll see you right back here on Monday!

Friday, January 18, 2013

Face the Music! Hit SEND for Cryin' Out Loud! + Giveaway!

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Come on. Wail it out. That's right, dunk your head in the empty pan and let the wails bounce off the sides.

You'll feel better if you do.

*deep breath*

Do it again if you have it. I'll wait.

And wait.

And wait.

Are you done yet?

Here's a tissue. Dry your eyes, wipe the snot out of the pan and let's chat.

Ooo BABY is it hard to hit send.

Did I realize how debilitating that was until my finger was hovering over the left hand clicker button? Um. No.

Did I have to call and chat with a writer friend and have her pray with me before hitting send? Yes.

Three things you should do before hitting send:

Read over the submission email one more time. Not ten more times, just one more time. Especially if you're submitting to Chip Macgregor. His big pet peeve is misspelled words. Just sayin'.

Double check that EVERYTHING is attached.

We've all sent those emails that said "I"m attaching such and such" and then never hit the attach button. Um...yeah.

PRAY. Find a friend and pray.

Talk about a stress reliever! This makes a world of difference and is the #1 thing you should before hitting that all important key. Your writing career/life/marriage/relationships do not hang in the balance of the response of the agent. (Though for the sake of your spouse's sanity they might think it does. ;-) I couldn't believe how much more prepared I was to hit that all important button until I called my friend. Thanks Beth!

Bonus suggestion: DO NOT, (let me repeat that) DO NOT reread and reread and reread what you sent out.

Inevitably you will find mistakes. You are human after all and there is SOMETHING you messed up along the lines. Forget it. It's gone. There is nothing you can do it about now, so just his send and move on.

We all know these things of course, but knowing that others get it make a great deal of difference. We so often celebrate only the great things that have happened in our writing, but we should also take the time to acknowledge that it doesn't happen quickly. It's a hurry up and wait process, even when you send in a follow up email. There is always something going on in the background that God has got His hands on that we know nothing about.

Gives me goosebumps. I love that thought.

Another suggestion? Tell some friends that you've submitted. Let them join in the excitement of waiting. I decided that was one thing I didn't want to be shy about and while I don't tell everyone I'm waiting to hear from an agent, I did tell several of my coworkers and people that stop by the clinic. It's fun to give progress reports, even when there is nothing new to share. It's these kind of support systems that you should embrace.  Waiting can actually be kind of fun...once you get past the first nervous week. ;-)

Have you hit send yet this year? Planning to?

Leave a comment for a chance to win Ethel Herr's An Introduction to Christian Writing (second edition) which I'll be giving away and announce the winner in tomorrow's weekend edition! 

Thursday, January 17, 2013

Just Do It

I used to be the queen of "I'll try."

When my hubby and I were dating, I used the term once, and he promptly corrected me. "Don't try, Krista. Just do it."

At first, I was highly irritated at the man. He's super super lucky that I didn't kick him to the curb at the time:-) (Doesn't he know that he was dating me and lecturing is NOT a fantastic way to woo a woman? Just saying...)

Anyway, I mulled it over and decided he was super right.

I used "I'll try" as an excuse just in case I failed. It was my out, my "I did my best and that's all that matters" that would make me feel better about falling flat on my face.

But... when I used it, I tended to fall on my face much faster and get up much slower.

Over the years, I've grasped the whole Nike slogan with more gusto.

Do I still fall flat on my face?

You bet.

But, instead of shrugging my shoulders and saying, "Well, I tried my best", I now brush off the dirt, crack my knuckles, and get to be business of "just doing it" one more time.

The writing life is kinda like that.

If you "try" to write.... something will always conveniently come up and get in the way.
If you "try" to take a whirl at this whole publishing thing... odds are that it'll get kinda hard, you'll get a few rejection letters (or the dreaded no response) and shrug your shoulders with a sad, "Oh well, I tried."

If God is truly calling you to write... then just do it.

NO excuses.
NO "I'll try"s.
NO buts.

Just. Do. It.

Will you get rejected? Odds are, yes.
Will you get writer's block? If you don't, then I'm thoroughly jealous.
Will you want to quit? Most likely on average once a week or more.

But the persistant and obedient will be victorious. Those who keep there eyes on JESUS and follow HIS commands will win the race God has set out for them.

Discussion: Are you an "I'll try"er? What are some other fun slogans that can be applied to the writing life?

Wednesday, January 16, 2013

Titles that Tell the Truth


Duped.

One week ago, I held out hope to the last page of the book I read. But I was duped.

I held out a certain hope with each page because of the promise declared in the title. And as I turned the last page, I felt the title lied to me. 

The title lured me in for an exciting story, promised a certain adventure which would lead to suspense, a page turner, and did not deliver. I chose it over other books in the seconds I had available.  

As a reader, I feel the title is a promise-a contract. As a writer I am obligated to convey the truth in the title, especially if I want readers to buy more of my books.

FB friends helped form this list of classic book titles they felt kept the promise. This in no way indicated the quality of the book or whether the person liked the book.

The Secret Garden
The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet
Dante's Inferno
 . . . and many others

..and their list of classic book titles they felt did not keep the promise. Once again, this list does not indicate quality of the book or whether the person liked it. 

God's Little Acre
Gone with the Wind
Catcher in the Rye
Grapes of Wrath
To Kill a Mocking Bird
The Glass Menagerie


A title needs to:

*Capture a reader's attention  (Brave Heart, The Comedy of Errors)

*Have few words (Persuasion, Kidnapped)

*Be Unique (Jaws, The Wizard of Oz)

*Allude to the theme (Dante's Inferno), 
                  the main character (Sherlock Holmes), 
                  the setting (The Secret Garden and 1984), 
             or the genre (Murder on the Orient Express)

*Tell the truth about the story (Beauty and the Beast, The Importance of Being Earnest

*Spark a question (Pilgrim's Progress- what did the pilgrim progress from and too? The Great Gatsby - why is he/she so great? The Secret Garden - what is the secret?)

Tips to Writing a Better Title:

1. Make a list of words or phrases that match your theme, setting, character, story question. Use every word you can think of and their synonyms. Consider writing each word on it's own post it. 

2. From this list form possible titles by shifting and grouping words (this same method can be seen in the movie Julie and Julia when the title for Julia Child's cookbook Mastering the Art of French Cooking was formed) Also, Beth Vogt talks about using this method.

3. Read the list out loud. Which top three titles sound right?

4. Ask crit partners their opinion and suggestions

5. Modify your top three choices.

6. Ask others outside your crit partners.

7. Let the list soak in your thoughts.

8. Now pick the winner and don't be afraid to change your mind - or pick more than one. Editors don't mind. 

The title of this post, and my previous post as well, changed at least five time before I pressed the publish key. Even the title of my blog post must convey the meaning while intriguing.

The title works in harmony with the cover. 
They are the door to your book. 

Reader: What formula have you used to construct a winning title? 
               What title really rings solid for you?
               What title falls short of the mark?


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This blog post is by Mary Vee

Mary has moved to Michigan with her husband, closer to her three college kids. She misses the mountains of Montana, but loves seeing family more often. She writes contemporary Christian fiction with a focus on the homeless population and loves to pen missionary and Bible adventure stories on her ministry blog, God Loves Kids.


Finalist Phoenix Rattler Writing Contest 2012 
Semi finalist Clash of the Titans, Olympia Writing Contest 2012 (finalists announced 2013)
Finalist Christmas Tree Writing Contest 2012

Website www.maryvee.com Step into Someone Else's World
Ministry blog to families: God Loves Kids http://www.mimaryvee.blogspot.com





Tuesday, January 15, 2013

Beginnings...Genesis Style

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The minister at my church started a new series on Genesis and I was struck by the way God orchestrated the beginning of His creation, the steps He followed and the organization of it all. Writers can learn a lot from the Master Creator, the One who created the most famous book of all time. So what can writers learn about beginnings from Him who began it all?

  • Awesome First Lines: What can be better than "In the beginning, God created the heavens and earths."? Seriously, it starts at the beginning of time. Before the beginning of time, if you want to be technical about it. It introduces the main character and it encapsulates in just a few words the magnitutde of God's ability. GREAT first line!
  • Each Step Builds Upon Each Other: Each verse in Genesis 1 is a stepping stone to the next, building the story, one building stone at a time. God creates light and makes the day. On the second day, God separates the water from the sky. On the third day He made the land appear and created vegetation. On the fourth day, God created the sun, moon, and stars. On the fifth day, He made fish and birds. On the sixth day, He created land animals, and then man and woman; it was all very good. These days of creation were all necessary. You can't have animals without vegetation to eat. You can't have fish without water to live in. Building your story in a natural sequence will make your story strong and understandable.
  • Climax: Oh yes, there is is a climax in this first chapter. It is the creation of man and there is even a song written about it in verse 27. This is the pinnacle of creation, the making of man in God's very own image. What can you write in your chapter to bring excitement and climax to the scene?
  • The End of the Chapter Hangs: The last sentence in Genesis 1 goes like this..."God saw all that he had made, and it was very good. And there was evening, and there was morning--the sixth day." Not quite the cliff hanger, huh? I mean, it is a good couple of sentences, but the formula is the same as the other verses. God saw that it was good. Just an end to another day. But that makes me wonder what the next verse will bring. Does the next chapter start with another creation? One more fabulous thnt the previous days? Let me turn the page and see...nope...just a day of rest. (one of the most important things EVER...especially on a Sunday afternoon!) Make your chapter ending count. Make the readers want to turn the page a see what's next!
In your daily Bible reading, look for structure to the stories you read. Find the building blocks. Look for awesome first lines. See if chapters end on high note. Is there a climax in the scene? Or a dark moment in the main story? What do you find? 

How does that inspire you to work great beginnings in your own story? 

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Sherrinda is a minister's wife and mother to three giant sons and one gorgeous daughter. A born and bred Texan, she writes historical romance filled with fun, faith, and forever love.

Monday, January 14, 2013

Writing with Thing 1 and Thing 2


There’s been a whole lot of talk lately about goals for the New Year, ‘words’ to plan our 2013, and new objectives to move forward in our writing careers.

And I have nothing but good things to say about planning, making goals, and sticking to them. In fact, there are plenty of times with other AlleyCats and unnamed Seekers have to offer me a swift kick in the pants to get back on track :-)
But underneath all the planning and projections, there are two little things called ‘motivation’ and ‘intention’ that provide a foundation for all of the above.

They're alot like Thing 1 and Thing 2 out of Dr. Seuss’ Cat in the Hat J
These two ‘things’ drive our wild and wacky world of writing in one direction or the other.
They are the incentive behind our creativity and out-of-the-box thinking. One is our ‘drive’ and the other is our purpose.

To put it simply, one is the heart of our writing…and the other is the head J
And you can’t have one without the other.
So, what am I talking about here?

Why do you write?

When we evaluate our writing worlds, what is our Thing One and Thing Two?


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We all have them, whether we know it or not.  The two things that stir up our emotions and propel us forward with our stories - the pulse and purpose behind our novels.

What are your PRIMARY ones? Your main reasons? When you let your Thing One and Thing Two out of their boxes, what do you find?
There are several possible answers and none of them are wrong. I'm going to start with a few of the most "superficial" (which I do not mean in a negative way here), and then move to those that are hitting more at the core of who we are.

1.       If your motivation is to gain recognition, then your intention might be to write the next bestseller.

There is NOTHING wrong with either of these. Some writers write just for the sheer joy of seeing their names in print and holding their stories in the hands.  The prestige and attention associated with your name in print can be the catalyst to keep your writing more and more. But the 'next bestseller' will only last so long. Will this motivation or intention be enough to sustain you for the long haul?

2.       If your motivation is to entertain, then your intention might be to tell a good story and hone your craft.

       NOTHING wrong with this one either. Reading is a fabulous escape and can be a wonderful journey. And we all want to read books that are well written, but keep in mind that reviewers are not always friendly -and everyone has an opinion. Setting all your eggs in this basket can end in some big time disappointment and insecurity.

3.       If your motivation is to earn money, then your intention might be to write quickly and often.

       Again, nothing wrong with this one either. It’s called a job and serves a vital purpose. But remember, the majority of authors out there also hold some sort of second job, or have a working spouse, because there are few authors who are paid enough (or write at such a level of recognition) to solely write for a living.

However, I want to talk to you about two more 'things' we might not focus on as much. Two that I think really hits the mark for most of us who write with a Christian focus.

4.       If your motivation is out of sheer joy in the writing journey, then your intention is to…write.

       That’s all. You find deep and satisfying pleasure in storycrafting. But I believe this internal satisfaction comes from a much deeper place

5.       If your motivation is to glorify God, then your intention will be to craft stories that point to Jesus in some way or other.

In all honesty, I think we are called to write. It’s more than just something we ‘want’ to do, but something God stirs within us in an indescribable sort of way. We find joy in the journey and we find our desire fueled by creativity, because of the work Christ is doing in our souls. We're compelled to share it in the way He's gifted us... writing.

When our Thing 1 and Thing 2 come from that perspective, our goals, plans, and objectives are clear. Our writing has the best motivation paired with the best purpose.

Why? Because the end-result goes beyond us and touches the core of other human beings. We're writing for the One, first and foremost, and that motivation and intention ripples out to others through our lives and the written word.
Have you ever noticed how Jesus transforms whoever he sets-his-mind out to meet?

His directness and influence change some rough fishermen into history-altering apostles, a adulteress-Samaritan into an amazed disciple, and a self-righteous murderer into a Word-wielding missionary. He left the blind seeing, the deaf hearing, the lame leaping, and the dead breathing. His sheer presence changed the dynamics of all those around him.

And His Spirit lives in US! Whoa.

So what happens when HE influences our stories? When His love penetrates the fabric of our tales and permeates throughout our characters’ lives? When his grace builds the binding of our books and beats at the heart of our stories’ themes?
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Comfort.
Transformation.
Healing.
Faith.
Miracles???
And it doesn’t have to be super-obvious. In fact, some of the best moments happen in the everydayness of things.

Most of the time, in our real lives, people see Jesus in us when we don’t say a word, then they begin asking questions which leads to a discussion about our primary Calling..Jesus.
If our motivation is to glorify him through the joy of writing so that He will influence the readers through our stories, then…it will happen. Because our priorities are in order - and He finds pleasure in celebrating with His kids.
The recognition is nice. Entertainment is fun.  Earning money is certainly helpful.
But when it’s time to clean up at the end of your day, your year, or your life, what will matter most?
The story Christ is telling through you, because when his love is theme of your life, then it will automatically come out in your writing too.
And the possibilities of what He can do with our Thing 1 and Thing 2???
It’s out of this world J

So, what is your motivation for writing? Do you know what it is? If you have a Christian focus, how do you hope Christ is shown in your writing?

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Pepper Basham writes Blue Ridge Mountain Romance peppered with grace and humor. She's a pastor's wife, mom of five, and full-time speech-language pathologist who loves working with kids on the Autism Spectrum. She's constantly in search of more time in a day, a good laugh, a friendly hug, a piece of chocolate, great jazz, and a new story. She's stays in awe of God's goodness in calling her to write and His faith in her to be able to do it in the middle of her chaotic life. Obviously He has a whole lot more faith in her than she does. She lives in Tennessee with her family and monster-dog, Sampson.