So you've got a wip, or a finished novel, and whether it is for a contest or a proposal, you are asked to write a synopsis of your 300 page book, in O-N-E P-A-G-E. Hm. Seriously? Yes, yes, it sounds like torture, but if you step back and think about it, this is a GREAT exercise. A one page synopsis makes you sit down and hash out your story, understand your character arc, and weed out the unnecessaries. Actually, if you do the synopsis before you have completed your manuscript, you might just tighten your plot and find yourself able to write the rest of the story with clearer vision.
After a couple of years of struggling with these babies, I've had some awesome critiques and advice from fellow writers that I'd like to share.
Tip #1: Only include major plot points that move the main character(s)/plot line forward. Your plot may have some great twists and turns, and the use of secondary characters to move the plot forward, but be sure to only focus on the significant things that get your character from point A to point B.
Here's an example from my own synopsis (keep in mind that Yana and Andres are the main characters):
Before:
The chief's second wife, Shina, births a stillborn. Chief Vio shuns her because of this. Shina has a history of lusting after other men, so when Yana discovers Shina and Alvarez in intimate conversation, she tells Andres to warn Alvarez about Shina's shameful desires.
UGH!!
After:
When Yana discovers the commander in a heated embrace with her father's second wife, she warns Andres that the entire crew of Spaniards could be put to death.
NOTE: Think of the synopsis from the perspective of your main character, and what it does to move the plot forward in their perspective.
Tip #2: Cut out unnecessary words as much as possible. Who loves flowery speech?? I do! I do! But one page is the limit:
My example (although, as I write this, I see even more ways I can cut this down!):
Before:
When they come to a great river, Andres is anxious to board their crude vessel, but fears the savages they may face on their voyage.
To the point:
When his crew comes to a great river, Andres boards their vessel, fearful of the savages they might find.
Tip #3: Use an active voice. This is something I have struggled with in my writing also...it's so easy to slip into passive voice (the dreaded “tell vs. show”). If you use the active voice, you have a better chance at keeping your word count down also.
My example:
Passive:
From Andres's heart-filled journal entries, he embellishes on his constant reliance on God's provision in the face of wild creatures, and disease among their crew.
Active:
Andres is determined to rely on God's provision in the face of wild creatures and threatening disease.
Tip #4: Let your voice sing! What judge, agent, or editor wants to read a monotone play-by-play? Be sure to weave your voice in the presentation of your synopsis. Say it like you would write it in your book. Maybe even use some lines in your book if you can make them fit with the flow of the synopsis. Make it unique, make it YOURS!
What are your biggest concerns with a one-page synopsis? Do you have any tips you'd like to share?
Cami Tang offers her EXCELLENT professional advice on the one page synopsis! Check it out here.
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