You can't get a cup of tea big enough or a book long enough to suit me.
—C. S. Lewis
My sentiments as well, only substitute coffee for tea.
Lewis and I aren’t alone. Whole herds of bookstore browsing readers are attracted to the width of a book’s spine, the larger the better. Apparently there’s still a place in this skinny-obsessed world for plus-size books.
As a writer, I prefer writing long fiction. I tend to think in stories 120,000 words long (approximately 480 pages) in a time when publishers are wanting books of 90,000 words. My American Family Portrait Series comprises nine hefty volumes, or 1,230,600 words. My Songs in the Night trilogy totals 334,500 words, or approximately 1,340 pages. Like I said, I like long stories.
So what are some of the things I've learned about writing long fiction? Three come to mind:
1. Long fiction is different than short fiction. Deep stuff, huh? But the difference is worth noting. The same disparity holds true for runners. Sprinters are built differently than marathon runners; they think and train differently. Even so, short story writers and epic novelists are dissimilar storytellers.
The difference is pace. Short fiction is a breathless dash, while long fiction—though it has its breathless moments—develops over time with leisurely scenes of intimacy and reflection. This varied pace is not an excuse for bloated detail or meandering storylines. Clean, crisp writing is just as critical in long fiction as short fiction. What attracts readers to long fiction is the accumulative rise and fall of the narrative; like a panoramic landscape, it is powerful and majestic.
So how does one learn to pace long fiction? Beginning marathon runners train with veteran marathon runners. So too, those who aspire to write long fiction must learn from those who write long fiction. Read long fiction. A lot of it. Not only read it, study it until the rise and fall of narrative action becomes second nature.
2. Not all writers can write long fiction. It takes a special talent. I learned this while reading James Michener’s autobiography. Michener is probably the quintessential long fiction writer. He pointed out that long fiction writers have certain intellectual equipment. They must be able to see the entire novel, to remember what every character said and did - and why they said and did it - over hundreds of thousands of words and months or years of writing. I had to know what my first character said in the first book on the first page when I wrote the last word on the last page of the ninth volume fifteen years later.
3. When writing long fiction it's best to have a roadmap. The journey of 1000 miles begins with a single step, and the writing of 1000 pages begins with a single word. So it's important that you have a good idea where you're going when you start out. J. K Rowling said that she knew the ending to the Harry Potter series before she wrote the first book. Having that kind of target makes it easier to aim every story element of your book in the right direction. When J.R.R. Tolkien had Frodo leave the Shire, neither of them knew every adventure that would take place, but they both knew that the journey would culminate at the fires of Mordor.
The map doesn't have to be chronological. For Michener, the map resembled a quilt, its characters and storylines linked by geography. He said, "I would break my narrative into splendid panels, leaving it to the reader to bind the whole together."
Probably the greatest advantage of long fiction is not the story itself—though there is nothing like snuggling in for a good long read—but the depth of characterization. Every year tourists stand at the front counter of the Atlanta Visitors Bureau and request the location of the graves of Scarlet O'Hara and Rhett Butler. What a wonderful testament to author Margaret Mitchell. This is long fiction at its best.
You can find out more about Jack's books on his website at http://www.jackcavanaugh.com/
or his blog at http://www.jcwordforge.com/
You will not be disappointed by the stories he creates. Brilliant, masterful, and definitely on the 'plus size' :-)
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Saturday, October 9, 2010
Sunday, September 26, 2010
What's Up the Street for Next Week?
A bend in the road. We often don't see it coming. Especially in life. An unexpected event, whether good or bad can take us on a dive in a completely new direction.
What would happen if we didn't follow that bend? If we decided that we were just fine and content to stay in the normal, familiar. I wonder how much we would miss out on. What surprises God might have in store just around the corner. And in writing nothing could be a more curvy journey.
So while you traverse the twists and turns to publication, or to the next WIP or even just to the computer to write, take a quick pit stop and check out what is around the corner here at the Alley.
Monday: A Heavenly Perspective to Character Development. With the ACFW fueling her inspiration, stop by to see what Pepper has to share with us today.
Tuesday: Sharing her thoughts and wisdom in the only way she can, Sherrinda entertains while inspiring.
Wednesday: The Essence of Plot will inspire your morning writing session. And if you have missed the first two "essence" posts, visit them here: Part 1 and Part 2
Thursday: The last installment in Casey's Myth Buster series is up with Secondary Characters are Cardboard Cutouts. Hmm, does she really know what she is talking about? We shall see, won't we?
Friday: *drum roll please* KRISTA IS BACK! Launching into her new series with Romancing the Blog. It will be so good to have her back, so don't pass up this post!
Saturday: Pinch me, I must be dreaming... Laura Frantz is visiting the blog ladies and gentlemen, and doing a giveaway of both of her books! Don't miss this event, it will be tremendous fun!
Friday: *drum roll please* KRISTA IS BACK! Launching into her new series with Romancing the Blog. It will be so good to have her back, so don't pass up this post!
Saturday: Pinch me, I must be dreaming... Laura Frantz is visiting the blog ladies and gentlemen, and doing a giveaway of both of her books! Don't miss this event, it will be tremendous fun!
SideWalk Talk
With a spectacular line up coming to the Alley in the next few weeks, I have to keep pinching myself about how blessed we are to secure these interview spots. How thrilling can it be to have these wonderful, accomplished authors here with us. Almost as good as going to ACFW!
10/9: Jack Cavanaugh on writing a series in order
10/16: Susan Meissner interview
10/23: Siri Mitchell interview
10/30: Camy Tang on acquiring an agent
NewsStand
October brings with it lovely fall colors and a new romance series to Pepper's blog! Seasons of Change: Falling Into Love with Mary Connealy, Julie Lessman, Margaret Brownley and more!
Be sure and check out Shannon Vannatter's blog, The Inkslinger Blog on October 1st when she hosts an interview she had with Casey on her "love story"
October 7th holds another interview date for Casey with Julia Reffner from Dark Glass Ponderings as she talks about the ministry of her blogging.
And now for your viewing pleasure, check out this links for photos of this past 2010 ACFW Conference. Enjoy!
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Sunday, September 19, 2010
What's Up the Street for Next Week?
ACFW Conference: Special Edition
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| Pepper with Mary Connealy |
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| Audra Harders, Pepper, Angie Dickens |
But, I won't speak too loudly, because our own dear PEPPER is at the conference *quelling jealous envy* and she is going to check in and deck our weekend edition out with plenty of photos from the events! So you won't have to feel too left out. Just photoshop yourself in. Makes you feel like you were there. ;-)
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| Pepper and Linore Rose Burkard |
Monday: Pepper is blogging LIVE from the conference! Don't miss it.
Tuesday: Sherrinda is your hostess today and grab a pencile and pad, because Layers and Subplots is headed your way!
Wednesday: Expanding Setting, taking your setting onto a deeper level and make it a living character in your story.
Thursday: Ly. Was. Ing. Three little letters that can kill a manuscript... or can they? Myth Busters Installment #4 is headed your way today!
Friday: Sherrinda rounds out our month long series on Vacation Fridays, with a spectacular look at her past travels!
Saturday: Do you live with your characters? Does the thought scare you? Author Joseph Bentz (and speaker at ACFW, Pep did you go see him??) will be joining us to discuss this very topic.
NewsStand
The winner of Jody Hedlund's The Preachers Bride is... Carol N. Wong!!! Congratulations and thanks to Jody for visiting the Alley!
The winner of Jody Hedlund's The Preachers Bride is... Carol N. Wong!!! Congratulations and thanks to Jody for visiting the Alley!
Take a deep breath. The conference and hubbub is almost over and you are returning with a fresh burst of new enthusiasm. Just what those suffering (or not so suffering) manuscripts need! But be sure and check out these author visits to the Alley for the month of October, they are sure to be loaded with wisdom!
10/2: Laura Frantz joins us (with a giveaway!)
10/9: Jack Cavanaugh is on the Alley
10/16: Susan Meissner is interviewed
10/23: Siri Mitchell is here! (pinch me! I can't wait!)
10/30: Camy Tang rounds out our month and shares much wisdom
SideWalk Talk
The ACFW banquet is tonight at 7:30 EDT and there is going to be a LIVEBLOG of the event! Check it out here, don't miss it! (I don't plan too :-)
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Sunday, September 12, 2010
What's Up the Street for Next Week?
Yahooooo! Strap on yer spurs, saddle up yer pony and dress up in yur best duds, 'cause the Fair has come to town!
Since I happen to be the one doing the weekend editions this month, and our local Fair just happens to be going on this week (or rather today, ending), our weekend edition is about going to the fair.... ya'll! ;-) (and just to be fair - pun intended- we really don't talk like that here.)
Do you enjoy attending the Fair in your community? I raised 4H sheep for 9 years and always had quite a few things in all the exhibit buildings and living in a small community Fair was/ is a pretty big deal for us. The excitement, the lights, the energy! Seeing people you don't see all year long at the Fair. I just love it all. :-)
So while I finish off the last of the Fair excitement in my hometown, see what is coming up here at the Alley for the week. Check back in with ya later. :-)
Monday: We write what you know and what we learn around us, even if it is our family. Pepper takes us on a journey to understand the pros and cons of writing fiction with our family experiences as examples.
Tuesday: Sherrinda has interviewed debut author, Jody Hedlund and rumor has it that there will be a giveaway, so don't miss this one!
Friday: Casey doesn't travel, doesn't really know how to do a vacation, so what she will post about today for the next installment of Vacation Fridays is ANYONE'S guess.
Saturday: Best selling, popular author, James Scott Bell was interviewed by our own Pepper, so stop by to read his interview. Sure to inspire and motivate!
Since I happen to be the one doing the weekend editions this month, and our local Fair just happens to be going on this week (or rather today, ending), our weekend edition is about going to the fair.... ya'll! ;-) (and just to be fair - pun intended- we really don't talk like that here.)
Do you enjoy attending the Fair in your community? I raised 4H sheep for 9 years and always had quite a few things in all the exhibit buildings and living in a small community Fair was/ is a pretty big deal for us. The excitement, the lights, the energy! Seeing people you don't see all year long at the Fair. I just love it all. :-)
So while I finish off the last of the Fair excitement in my hometown, see what is coming up here at the Alley for the week. Check back in with ya later. :-)
Monday: We write what you know and what we learn around us, even if it is our family. Pepper takes us on a journey to understand the pros and cons of writing fiction with our family experiences as examples.
Tuesday: Sherrinda has interviewed debut author, Jody Hedlund and rumor has it that there will be a giveaway, so don't miss this one!
Wednesday: Fatty. It can pervade our writing and bog it down in the mire of wordiness, but how can you make the novel longer while avoiding the excess and sprouting gray hairs? Mary will explain.
Thursday: Myth Busters #3: Backstory is Boooooring. Part three in Casey's month long installment is ready, will she dispute your myth?
Friday: Casey doesn't travel, doesn't really know how to do a vacation, so what she will post about today for the next installment of Vacation Fridays is ANYONE'S guess.
Saturday: Best selling, popular author, James Scott Bell was interviewed by our own Pepper, so stop by to read his interview. Sure to inspire and motivate!
SideWalk Talk
9/25: Joseph Bentz joins us for a talk about keeping your characters with you- the prons and cons of living with them
10/2: Laura Frantz comes by (with a giveaway of her books!) to share her experiences after the interview she had with Casey
10/9: Jack Cavanaugh teaches on writing a series in order, what tidbits of information will be dropped on our hungry ears? Stop back in to find out. :-)
10/16: Susan Meissner shares an interview she had with Casey just as the arrival of her latest book, Lady in Waiting hits the store shelves! Don't miss it.
NewsStand
The winner of Paper Roses from last weekend's special guest, Amanda Cabot is.... Edwina! Congratulations!
Our very own Pepper has WON the TARA writing contest! Woo-hoo Pepper!! Be sure and leave a comment with your congrats. :-)
Mary's blog is always hopping! Here is what is going on over there this week: Mon: Fall Tip # 2 How to Live Like a Wise King; Wed and Sat: Walk through Egypt during the time of the first plagues.
Our very own Pepper has WON the TARA writing contest! Woo-hoo Pepper!! Be sure and leave a comment with your congrats. :-)
Mary's blog is always hopping! Here is what is going on over there this week: Mon: Fall Tip # 2 How to Live Like a Wise King; Wed and Sat: Walk through Egypt during the time of the first plagues.
ACFWers are heading off to the conference in a few short days! Be watching for the coming weekend editions where I will include links to look at all the fun pictures from the events, for those of us who couldn't attend. :-(
Don't forget yur boots partner, we got a rip-roaring linup for ya. Don't miss it! (because if you do, you know what they say about the wild, wild west. Anything can happen. :-)
Sunday, September 5, 2010
What's Up the Street for Next Week?
September is here which means Fall is just around the corner... 18 days away to be precise. Not so sure I am eager to see the green and sunshine go away, but I do know that I love the changing of nature's cloak.
With just a slight nip in the air it is the perfect time to cozy up to a crackling fire and pry open a good book... or write the next chapter on your WIP. And hopefully this week on the Alley there will be some great advice (or what we think to be great advice) to help propel your story forward.
So grab a cup of coffee or hot chocolate and settle in for lessons on the craft of writing.
Monday: Hooks in the beginning, hooks in the middle, hooks in the end... Oh sorry wrong thought there. But Pepper will be talking hooks, how to keep that reader turning from chapter to chapter. Don't miss it!
Tuesday: What to write when there isn't anything to write? Sherrinda is your hostess today, don't miss out on the sunshine she brings to the Alley. ;-)
Wednesday: Part two of Mary's parable and allegory series, how it enriches our writing, to be used even in everyday fiction!
Thursday: Myth Buster #2 Show Don't Tell. What secrets will Casey unearth and explode in the face of one of today's popular "myths"? Only time will tell, so check back in.
Friday: The Grand Canyon. A spectacular view and a breathtaking glimpse of God's creation. Mary takes us there on the next installment of Vacation Fridays.
Saturday: Plotting your novel? Want some great advice? Stop by to visit with author Cara Putman as she talks about how she plotted her latest novel, Stars in the Night.
~James Scott Bell
~Joseph Bentz
~Laura Frantz
~Jack Cavanaugh
Casey interview Julie Lessman on her blog! A giveaway of Julie's highly anticipated novel, A Hope Undaunted is being given away! Don't miss it.
Don't forget to check out the post with author Amanda Cabot from yesterday. There is a giveaway involved. *wink*
Mary's blog: Monday: Fall Tip #1: How to be a Super Hero. Wed and Sat: Take a walk in Moses' shoes as he stands before Pharaoh. Will Pharaoh refuse to let the children of Israel go? How will God respond if Pharaoh doesn't let them go?
If you live in the Northwest, check out this writing conference coming to Boise, Idaho! Here is the link for you to check out the Idaho Book Extravaganza
A great week on the Alley in store, we hope you will stop by, you just never know what to expect!
With just a slight nip in the air it is the perfect time to cozy up to a crackling fire and pry open a good book... or write the next chapter on your WIP. And hopefully this week on the Alley there will be some great advice (or what we think to be great advice) to help propel your story forward.
So grab a cup of coffee or hot chocolate and settle in for lessons on the craft of writing.
Monday: Hooks in the beginning, hooks in the middle, hooks in the end... Oh sorry wrong thought there. But Pepper will be talking hooks, how to keep that reader turning from chapter to chapter. Don't miss it!
Tuesday: What to write when there isn't anything to write? Sherrinda is your hostess today, don't miss out on the sunshine she brings to the Alley. ;-)
Wednesday: Part two of Mary's parable and allegory series, how it enriches our writing, to be used even in everyday fiction!
Thursday: Myth Buster #2 Show Don't Tell. What secrets will Casey unearth and explode in the face of one of today's popular "myths"? Only time will tell, so check back in.
Friday: The Grand Canyon. A spectacular view and a breathtaking glimpse of God's creation. Mary takes us there on the next installment of Vacation Fridays.
Saturday: Plotting your novel? Want some great advice? Stop by to visit with author Cara Putman as she talks about how she plotted her latest novel, Stars in the Night.
SideWalk Talk
The Alley welcomes well-known best selling authors to the blog to share their experiences in the publication world, check it out!~James Scott Bell
~Joseph Bentz
~Laura Frantz
~Jack Cavanaugh
News Stand
Casey interview Julie Lessman on her blog! A giveaway of Julie's highly anticipated novel, A Hope Undaunted is being given away! Don't miss it.
Don't forget to check out the post with author Amanda Cabot from yesterday. There is a giveaway involved. *wink*
Mary's blog: Monday: Fall Tip #1: How to be a Super Hero. Wed and Sat: Take a walk in Moses' shoes as he stands before Pharaoh. Will Pharaoh refuse to let the children of Israel go? How will God respond if Pharaoh doesn't let them go?
If you live in the Northwest, check out this writing conference coming to Boise, Idaho! Here is the link for you to check out the Idaho Book Extravaganza
A great week on the Alley in store, we hope you will stop by, you just never know what to expect!
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