Plotting with Disney - The Song of Longing

Did Disney’s news yesterday freeze you with shock? Frozen has become the largest grossing animated film of all time – even more than Toy Story! I was shocked. Sure it’s a cute movie, but THAT cute? Clearly I’m not ‘cool’ enough to get it – though I do recognize great storytellers when I hear/read them.

Disney is known for its GREAT stories, amazing characters, brilliant voices, fantastic secondary characters, marvelous animation, and, of course, stupendous music. In fact, you could plot a book from the pattern of songs through Disney’s movies.

So…

That’s what we’re going to do. Using the basic elements of Disney songs in a 3-part series (particularly from the ‘princess’ movies), I’m going to talk about the ‘melody’ of story structure. (I might have to slide in a fourth to give us that ‘happily-ever-after’ part. It wouldn't be Disney without it J

The basic three ‘songs’ we’re going to discuss in the 3-part series are:

The Song of Longing

The Song of Hope

The Song of Conflict/Antagonist

(and I’ll probably throw in a happily-ever-after part in here too) J

So, today, let’s talk about Disney’s Song of Longing.

It’s a staple for almost every Disney movie out there. If you don’t believe me, here’s a list of a few.

Some Day My Prince Will Come (Snow White)

When Will My Life Begin (Tangled)

A Dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes (Cinderella)

I Just Can’t Wait to be King (Lion King)

Belle (The song when she’s walking through town and their talking about how weird she is J

Out There (Hunchback of Notre Dame)

Reflection (Mulan)

Part of Your World (The Little Mermaid)

Do You Want To Build a Snowman (Frozen)

What do all these songs have in common? Each and every one of them is strategically placed in the story to express the main character's deepest longing.

Whether it’s a prince, the ‘lights’, an adventure, legs, self-discovery, or a deeper relationship with her sister, all of these songs express the main character's heart’s desire.

And YOUR story needs to express that too.

If your character doesn't have a longing and goal, then it is difficult for the reader to relate to her and stick with her to the end of the book.

What does your hero/heroine want? What does she dream about? What does she ache to obtain?

Usually there are two desires – an external and internal one. Many times one will directly relate to the other.

Let’s use Cinderella, for example.

External desire: Get to the ball

Internal desire: Have someone love her and take her away from her heartache

Clearly, these two are related since she wants to get to the ball to meet someone who might sweep her out of her glass slippers and into a wedding gown. In her song, A Dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes, Cinderella sings:

“In dreams you will lose your heartache. Whatever you wish for you keep. Have faith in your dreams and someday – a rainbow will come smiling through. No matter how your heart is grieving, if you keep on believing, the dream that you wish will come true.” The song expresses her deepest longing.

What about Mulan?

External desire: Keep her father from fighting/fight in her father’s place

Internal desire: Discover who she really is

Yep – both are intricately related to each other. She discovers who she is, her worth, while taking her father’s place in the battle. In her song, Reflection, Mulan sings “When will my reflection show who I am inside?” CLEAR indication of her heartfelt ache.

One more?

Tangled?

External desire: See the lights

Internal desire: Self-discovery and freedom

Through the monotony of her song, When Will My Life Begin, we hear her desire for something more meaningful than what she’s always known.

Does it make sense? The songs reflect something much deeper. The beginning of the story and the heart of the hero.

So…back to you? What is your hero/heroine’s deepest longing? Can you tell us an internal and external desire they have? 

Let us know….or list one of your favorite Disney “songs of longing”?

I Have a Dream: Defining Your Characters' Dreams

Confession: In the last seven years, almost every movie I have watched has a princess in it. I would guess I've seen all of the Disney princess movies at least ten times.

There's one Disney movie my children have played several times a month and I never get sick of it. Tangled.

I'm convinced every writer should watch this movie. A villain with depth. Quirky characters that defy the Disney "mold." A compelling beginning. A fairy-tale worthy ending that is "earned."

Do you have a favorite song from Tangled? Three guesses what my favorite is....

Let me set the scene. Snuggly Duckling is an eating establishment hidden in the woods. Hero Flynn Ryder brings Rapunzel in to the disreputable inn to frighten her from running away from her guardian. Rapunzel is naive to the world's ways. Mother Gothel keeps her locked up in a tower in the forest, isolated from the rest of the world. Reading, baking, cleaning, painting, and brushing her hair have been Rapunzel's sole entertainment. 

When Flynn and Rapunzel step into the Snuggly Duckling, they are surrounded by a clan of men in brown leather wielding weapons. Every metal detector's nightmare. Hook Hand Thug and his friends determine to make some money off the arrival of the "wanted" Flynn Ryder. 

Her entire life, Rapunzel dreams of watching as hundreds of lanterns are launched from the nearby village one single day each year. She needs Flynn to help her achieve this. Therefore, she is ready to defend Flynn with her handy weapon, a frying pan. 

"Find your humanity! Haven't any of you ever had a dream??!!" Rapunzel screeches out in frustration when even her trusted frying pan does not ward away these thugs. 

Rapunzel backs away as Hook Hand Thug makes his way to where she is standing and raises his axe high in the air. 

Ready to watch a chase scene, the viewer sits tense in her seat and then bursts into fits of laughing as Hook Hand Thug belts out "I had a dream once..." as he pounds on the ivories.

What is your character's dream? 

Dreams are a vital part of who your character is and show you what makes them tick. We spend a fair amount of time dreaming in our heroine's head, but each character has a dream that is essential to making your character likeable. We want to invest in their dreams. A good character's dreams become our own for at least a few hours.

What can we learn from Tangled about creating our character's dreams?

• Make at least some of your characters' dreams unexpected... We delight in the dreams of the misunderstood thugs who run Snuggly Duckling. These characters are violent rogues, yet their dreams amuse us because they are surprising. The wart and goiter covered lanky gentleman wants to fall in love. It is wonderful because it is unexpected. The reader is thrilled when his dream is realized. How can you choose a dream for one of your characters that will create surprise and delight in the readers?
• Don't forget to make the reader look deeper to find "layers" of the character's dream. Flynn Ryder is the first character we see and hear in the movie. At the beginning of the movie, Flynn takes a valuable tiara belonging to the lost princess from the palace. Flynn and his thief buddies appear to be mainly caught up in gaining riches for themselves. His heart seems to beat with the thought of the notoriety he earns as a "wanted" man. As Flynn is lowered in through the ceiling of the palace to steal the crown, the guard sneezes. "Hay fever?" Flynn questions. The viewer sees here that Flynn is more interested in the chase than the actual loot. We find a deeper insight into Flynn's dream as he opens up while sitting around a fire with Rapunzel. Here we learn Flynn is an alias for Eugene, an orphan boy who grew up poor and alone. Here we begin to understand, Flynn's true dream is to be known. 
• Bring in another character who will validate your character's dream. Rapunzel validates Flynn's true desire to be known by asserting to him that she prefers his real name, not the name he picked out of a storybook to impress others. She shows here she values Flynn's dream and who he is as a person.
• Don't forget your villain has dreams of his/her own, in addition to a desire to thwart your main character's dream. Mother Gothel's dream is to live forever and maintain her youth. Rapunzel thwarts this dream by making an escape from the tower and seeking to find out more about the lanterns launched from the palace each year. Make your villain's dream compelling and realistic.
• What does your character most fear and how does that relate to their dream? After leaving her cloistered tower world and the only human contact she has known, Rapunzel tells Flynn her fears. "What if its not everything I dreamed it would be?" Perhaps your character reaches what she thinks is her dream only to find disappointment? Maybe you just need to peel back another layer, like in Flynn's case? Perhaps the dream brings little fulfillment because it is only a cover for the character's real dream. Fame, riches, even romance can all come out empty and meaningless. What lie does your character believe that may keep him or her chasing false dreams?
• "You get to find a new dream." Flynn tells Rapunzel. There is no end to the dreams of our characters. Keep the conflict going. As soon as your character reaches their dream, leave a new dream dangling out of reach on the horizon. 

What are your character's dreams? 

 Julia enjoys writing women's fiction whenever she can find a chair free of smushed peanut butter sandwiches and lego blocks. She is a wife and homeschooling mama of two littles. She also a reviewer for Library Journal, Christian Library Journal, and Title Trakk.