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Did that title get your attention? If you’re trying to shed
a few pounds like I am, it might have J
For the past two weeks I’ve been carefully following an eating plan in the
hopes of detoxing my carb-loving, sugar-adoring, fat-storing body. I enjoy eating…for
the simple joy of eating, and after a few years, and a few kids, it’s taking
its eternal toil on me, so I’m trying to reduce my saggy middle.
It’s hard work, filled
with strategic planning and purposeful eating.
Progress is SLLLLOOOOWWWW, but I hope the reward at the end
will be worth the slogging.
Get where I’m headed?
One of the dreaded parts of novel writing or reading is
getting to a saggy middle of the story. Sometimes it can seem sluggish and
slow, other times it can feel really drawn, and there are even times when it
might have lots of action…but its only action for action’s sake – it doesn’t
move the story forward.
I’m writing the middle of my WIP right now and I’m trying to
brainstorm ways to make the middle as powerful as the beginning and end.
Finding that ‘finely
toned’ middle can be a lot of hard work, filled with strategic planning and
purposeful writing.
I’ve tried to think of 5 ways to help support toning up the
flabby middle of your novel.
1.
Spice
Things Up – adding action or emotional intensity is a great way to spice up
the center of the story. Mary Connealy once mentioned something about ‘when
things get slow, bring in a man with a gun.’ J
For her and Amy Leigh Simpson’s books, that would work….not so much for other
types. The point is, if you can keep the intensity high (as you hope to do
within each chapter), it will help keep the pacing of the story moving.
This is usually helpful when you have some
subplots going on.
It’s also a great place to reinforce your
character arc by bringing in some good scenes to support or challenge the
direction you want your character to go.
I’ve
added a subplot which has really intensified the middle but also undergirds my
heroine’s bigger story question.
What
about you? What are some tools you use to tighten your saggy story middle? What
are some books you’ve read where you’ve enjoyed the story all the way to the
end…even in the middle?
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Pepper
Basham is an award-winning author who writes romance peppered with grace and
humor. She’s a native of the Blue Ridge Mountains, a mom of five, a speech-language
pathologist, and a lover of chocolate. She enjoys sprinkling her native Appalachian
culture into her fiction whenever she can. She currently resides in the lovely
mountains of Asheville, NC where she works with kids with special needs,
searches for unique hats, and plots new ways to annoy her wonderful friends at
her writing blog, The Writer’s Alley. She is represented by Julie Gwinn and her
debut novel, The Thorn Bearer, released in April 2015. You can connect with
Pepper on her website at www.pepperdbasham.com, Facebook- https://www.facebook.com/pages/Pepper-D-Basham or Twitter at https://twitter.com/pepperbasham
Hi, Pepper. Thanks for these great tips. You have inspired me to go back and "tone" the middle of my novel, "Deliver Her." I recently visited Asheville's River Arts District and compared notes on the creative experiences with some artists I encountered. Here's my post: https://patdonovan.wordpress.com/2015/06/19/havent-got-time-for-the-pain-writers-and-artists-dig-deep-for-their-craft/
ReplyDeleteLove this, Pepper! I am working on my saggy middle, about halfway to my goal weight. I love your ideas for getting unstuck in your story, taking a walk seems to help me the most in my creativity.
ReplyDeletePATRICIA, so glad to hear Pepper's tips were helpful. Getting ideas from other artists and writers definitely helps. Thanks for stopping in.
These are great tips, Pepper! I am sure your WIP is stellar though.;) something I have found that helps with the saggy middle in a plot (still working on finding a good solution for my gut...ha), is having a secondary story line weaving through. It has helped me a ton with my current novel!
ReplyDeleteSo so good, Pep!!! Loved my lil shout out :)
ReplyDeleteOh the woes of that darn saggy middle! :)
ReplyDeleteGreat tips, Pepper. I can so relate to the writing on a deadline killing creativity! And I'm no where near the sagging middle. Yikes!
ReplyDeleteWe can do it! We can do it!